Overall it looks pretty good, but could probably use a few touch-ups where the hands meet the apple. It's probably just easiest to correct this in the pattern, rather than editing the image.
Have fun stitching!
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These wonderful woman's eyes are watching out from your monitor. I like it very much.
I think the pattern turned out great, thanks for sharing! The two tone effect of blue in the eyes adds a very nice look, and the sparkle in the eyes comes out looking great. If I had to guess, I would suspect that the the image was inspired by the Dune series by Frank Herbert. Incidentally, it is one of my favorite science fiction books, and the Sci-Fi miniseries was well done and stayed fairly true to the book. If you haven't read the book, I highly recommend it.